Slow Dance

Cherry

By threeleafshamrock

Sun, 10 Jul 2011
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14 comments
 

We move, imperceptibly
to the music;
my hands behind your heart,
as it races ahead of the beat.
Your arms around my neck,
your breath sending ripples
of pleasure down my spine;
eyes closed on my shoulder.
I breathe the scent of you;
passion's musk, made
heady by anticipation.
Drawing back my face,
I sense your lips part,
My heart whispers
... 'I Love You'.....
Your eyes, through
half closed, heavy lids
and your lips, as they
lay gently on mine,
reciprocate.

By Chris Birrane © 2011

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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is lovely chris

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
"my hands behind your heart, as it races ahead of the beat." - beautiful lines. Well done on the cherry, Chris! Magic xxx

 

Submitted by awsamy on
this is a very beautiful poem :) lovely

Submitted by adora on
I like this a lot. It portrays a feeling so familiar. Thanks for the reflection.
adora-

Submitted by Highhat on
Took me back quite a few years- thank you

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new threeleafshamrock Really deep smoochy,poem of love and romance.Well expressed lines Oh! just seen the cherry! well done.. julie xx

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
love the sensual delicacy to this piece, congrats on the cherry!

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thank you all for you lovely comments. Apologies for the fact, that owning to health issues, I have not been commenting or replying to comments, on a more regular basis... Chris ;)

Submitted by L G Meadows on
I almost felt like a voyeur it drew me into the feelings so much!

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks LG ...ALL the best writers were/are voyeurs; it's our greatest tool :) Chris ;)

Submitted by RachelPatricia on
This is beautiful, Chris - love those lines Magic picked out and 'I breathe the scent of you; passion's musk, made heady by anticipation.' - just stunning :) Rachel xx

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thank you Rachel, your comments much appreciated Chris ;)

Submitted by Savx on
Very good =) My favorite lines were "I sense your lips part, My heart whispers ... 'I Love You'....." I am quite a sucker for a good romance novel/poem. Awesome job. =) Savannah

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Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Savannah...nice to meet a fellow 'sucker' :) Chris ;)