The Colour Blue
By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 11 Sep 2011
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A decade on
I won’t be
in the aroma
of freshly-brewed,
Arabian coffee...
the sweet, slow-jazz
the muted,
smoky-sax
of waking
on a Sunday morning,
nor in autumn
touched trees
or rippling
seas of flax...frost
embroidered weeds
nor
in backlit,
watercolour,
wintry sunsets...
but
in the remnants
of a Gershwin song,
meandering
through your mind –
or pressed
between the pages
of a book,
and a leather marker
courtesy of
the National Trust...
the tripping of piano
drifting on the wings
of a green damselfly...
the smell of jasmine,
and in the colour blue
daubed upon a canvas
or buried, deep
in the canyons
of some
or other poem.
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Now this is how I like to
Now this is how I like to wake up to a Sunday Morning. This is so tender :)
Beautiful read :)
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"the canyons of some other
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
"the canyons of some other poem" - absolutely beautiful, Tina. A real poem for the senses. I love the smell of coffee, so that image particularly struck a chord with me! Well done on the cherry!
Magic xxx
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Lovely, vivid images.
Permalink Submitted by L G Meadows on
Lovely, vivid images. Enjoyed.
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Hi Tina, this is so
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
this is so descriptive and being a lover of
jasmine, I could smell the beautiful fragrance.
Also the colour blue daubed upon the canvas,
already for a creation of colour - texture
and beauty.
I was going to say a tender poem, but it looks
like Maggie beat me to it.
I very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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Sand Lady. All before me
Sand Lady.
All before me have said it all.
Great.
ScoZen
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yes, this was deeply written
Permalink Submitted by cormacru999 on
yes, this was deeply written and I liked it a lot. beautiful.
Nicholas Schoonbeck
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I bet you'll live to be a
I bet you'll live to be a hundred Tina and still write such brilliant poems like this one. I love jasmine too- now we can look forward to next Spring when it blossoms again. We are all in this together ;D
;)Pia
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Need to come back to this
Need to come back to this Tina, not because I need to but because I want to. Beautiful.
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Somehow I nearly missed
Permalink Submitted by Overthetop1 on
Somehow I nearly missed this. I am very, very glad I didn't. Wonderfully evocative. Each line is just so beatifully dreamy. I always end up calling your poems beautiful. But how else to describe them?
Overthetop1
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