Now Leaving From Platform Sixteen
By lenchenelf
Thu, 21 Jun 2012
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Our shoulders stagger a stepped mountain range,
mine tucked into a crevice of your erupting form.
Rumble tracked, this journey takes us back;
half terms, steam, soot and rumpled sandwiches.
Dot to dots pass time, lines snake undulations
as the hills roll their eyes, heavenwards.
Once, your iris's floated on glass panes
reflected beyond the world, mirrored on it.
Now, your gaze rests, light as snow, on my face,
as we race to adventure, at a pace of our own.
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Really gentle. Beautifully
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Really gentle. Beautifully done.
Parson Thru
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"Once, your iris's floated
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
"Once, your iris's floated on glass panes
reflected beyond the world, mirrored on it."
- love these lines, Lena. A stunning and beautiful poem, well done on the cherries!
Magic xxx
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beautiful... Rigel :)
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beautiful... Rigel :)
Mark Heathcote
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Loved this, Lena :)
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Loved this, Lena :)
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Hello, Really enjoyed this,
Hello,
Really enjoyed this, Lena. Have been meaning to come over to your site for some time now.
Loved this line
'Dot to dots pass time, lines snake undulations
as the hills roll their eyes, heavenwards'
I love the idea of hills rolling their eyes heavenwards.
Moya
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