Holy Cow! (I.P.)

Cherry

By luigi_pagano

Sun, 09 Mar 2014
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20 comments
 

A legend says that William wrote
“I wandered lonely as a cow”
but that didn’t get Dorothy’s vote.
I wonder whether they had a row.

Did they argue throughout the night,
and did her voice grow very loud
until her brother got the verse right?
The noun changed from cow to cloud.

A wrong word would be precarious.
From what I have read and also heard
cows aren’t lonely, they are gregarious:
they are quite happy in a large herd.

But maybe the legend is utter nonsense
and he never used the rogue expression,
so the readers should note its absence
and accept the poem without a question.

© Luigi Pagano 2014

 

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Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

An entertaining piece of nonsense          Elsie

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

One can always find the funny side in everything, whether it was meant to be jocular or otherwise, Elsie. I must admit I was sceptical when I read that alleged episode but it offered the perfect opportunity to be turned into a humorous piece. Glad you find it entertaining.

Luigi

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Luigi, I love what you did with this IP, brilliant. Good Luck in IP.

 

 

Well done.

 

Take care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Thanks very much, Trish, too kind.

Luigi xxx

 

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Lovely light humour Luigi, and interesting meter and of course, great rhyming.

Linda

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Pleased of your approval, Linda. Didn't pay much attention to the metre, concentrated on the humour. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Luigi

 

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Ditto all the above, and more, Luigi.  A wonderful take on the I.P. and story to matchsmiley

Tina xxx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

You know me Tina, always looking for a different angle. Thanks for your encouraging words.

Luigi xxx

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Very clever fun, Luigi. I thought the legend was your own concoction, til I read your comment above. I liked your use of 'precarious' and 'gregarious'.
Rhiannon

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

No concotion of mine Rhiannon. I have read this speculation in various publications not least The Guardian which in article entitled 'The ruthless side of William Wordsworth' quoted:

"à propos, has anyone else heard the story that Wordsworth originally wrote: 'I wandered lonely as a cow...'
but Dorothy told him: 'William, you can't put that'? It rings true of the 'stuffed owl' author."

As I said, it inspired me to write this ditty. Pleased it is to your liking.

Luigi

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyNo Luigi, Just truthfulsmileyIt is different, clever and executed brilliantly, and made me smile, so a definite yes lol.

 

Take care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

You have made my day, Trish. Much appreciated.

Luigi xxx

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyYour Very Welcome Luigi. And it's made me feel very happy to know that!!!!!

 

Take care

 

Trish xxx
 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

yes

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Luigi,

This is another of your fun reads and informative too, so clever old you!  Good take on the I.P. as well.

Moya

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

I find it a great challenge to come up with something a bit unusual for the I.P., not always succeeding. But this seems to have some appeal. It has had a few hits and - gracious me! - it has even been cherried. Thank you editors. And you dear Moya for stopping by.

Best regards to you and Derek.

Luigi

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

You are a highly humorous chap, Luigi. Intriguing take on the IP and I love the poet's knowing voice.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

I must have been a court jester in a previous life, Ray. Thanks for taking a look at this effort of mine.

Luigi

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I've come to this poem late Luigi,  most of what I think has already been said.  Just like to say I had a smile on my face as I read.  smiley

Clever and amusing. Congrats on the well deserved cherries.

Jenny.  xx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Better late than never, Jenny. Always nice to hear from you. smiley Thanks for telling me that you found this piece amusing.

Luigi xx