Coldplay wordplay wedding day



By samhennig
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Light breaks between late summer green
of overhanging, heavy laden branches of the surrounding trees.
You walk, your hand in his, sun creating white shadows that sparkle and glisten,
don't panic just listen,
the music plays for you and only you two.
There is a smile upon your face
and he leans over, a whisper
that nobody else need hear.
There is no fear
because you know he is the one you've been waiting for.
Sun beats, yellow, on your skin
and those surrounding branches shiver in the beautiful,
early evening wind, and in their shiver you can hear them sing.
You are no longer lost,
evening turns to night and stars light your onward path,
your hands never part, for you have both waited all these years
and now together you walk on, walk on.
He is atlas and you are his world
and it is magic.
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Fantastic piece Sam - the
Fantastic piece Sam - the best poem of yours I've read in a long time. Keep up the outstanding work!
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Excellent. Congratulations
Excellent. Congratulations on the well deserved picks Sam. Kudos.
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Brilliant - love this. It is
Brilliant - love this. It is so touching and gentle yet strong.
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written with love and serenity
Read it at her wedding eveyone will love it....might take out all the 'the's' in first verse, don't need them and without takes you closer to action (not I didn't say 'the' action) and as many of those other ones as you can...x
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