Looking For God In The Woods

Cherry

By D Marie

Tue, 05 Apr 2022
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"Are you there?"

                              A light wind

                              blows over me.

 

 

"Can you hear me?"

                              Low hanging branches

                              stroke my hair.

 

 

"Where are you?"

                               Pink wildflowers

                               sprinkle the ground.

 

 

"Why don't you answer?"

                                A  twig snaps

                                followed by a rustle.

 

 

"Is that you?"

                                I find a path

                                I've not taken before.

              

      

 

                

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

All we see there of beauty reminds us of his creative power and that he is everywhere, but his Word teaches more clearly that it is so.And there is quiet to think and trust and remember. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Hi Rhiannonw :)

i dont thnk of god as a he, just bc it sounds as if being male is more powerful. I think god is the best of both sexes and far more mysterious x

 

Submitted by Kris on

And hands together with a bow.....

(move a soul in written words)

May I pls print this out, I have a picture that would go perfect with this and hang it my home office. (of course your name, credit on it).....

(K)

 

Submitted by D Marie on

I'm flattered that you've asked. Yes, that's fine.

Out of curiosity can I see it afterwards?

Thanks Kris.

Donna

 

Submitted by Kris on

For sure I can send the picture to you

Or a pdf mock-up 1st w/ your poem.... (I'll size the final later for the wall)...

Thank You*

Peace, smiles and stay inspired Donna

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Thanks for the cherry. Always a confidence boost :)

 

Submitted by marandina on

What a beautiful meditation. Paul

 

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

I really enjoyed this poem, all the answers there in the woods. I think we have the same notion of a god. Beautifully done.

 

Submitted by celticman on

perhaps. perhaps not. I guess life is in the looking and listening.