Pluto’s Ode To Charon


By onemorething
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Another rewrite because TopTweetTuesday are having a day of poems about moons without using the word moon or lunar and preferably being about an unmentionable other that our own unmentionable. I'm not using Twitter anymore, but will be sharing this on BlueSky instead. The photo is from wikimedia commons. The original of this is still on here. Maybe 2020.
I churn and churn,
a vanilla coldness that bleeds its nitrogen
in dark lines carved deep now
into my own white plains.
Its pulse sets the strange haze
of my atmosphere, and
here the dazzle of my azure sky,
so blue that it promises oceans of warmth,
instead, beguiles with the dark shine of a first lie.
And you, my wordless companion,
twist, trapped with me in nightsong
of tidal dance. Every turn, I admit again,
I don't know why I am so capricious,
that I would unshackle you,
if I could, from this belt of ice,
to the liberty of any other galaxy,
where their worlds might be so lampful
that they shimmer with daybright,
yet it is impossible -
when in this hinterland, my winterglow,
unstarred, as I am,
you are my only light to see my way by.
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This poem is as mysterious
This poem is as mysterious and amazing as the planet itself.
Jenny.
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something to see cleary by.
something to see cleary by.
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What an intriguing idea to
What an intriguing idea to set people! You've done it more than justice here onemore. I never heard of Top Tweet Tuesday before - have they moved to Bluesky too?
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Poor Mars though!
Poor Mars though!
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Without moons
Gustav Holst in written word. Lovely lines of great mysteriousness.
I smiled at the concept of Top Tweet Tuesday. It gives the impression that Elon Musk has a fluffy side to him. I tend to forget about Mr Blue Sky. I'll go and have a look for your poem over there.
Turlough
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pale desolate beuaty
Yes, our own companion is very unique and extraordinary she still holds many secrets.
Keep Well! Good work! Tom
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I don't know how this one
I don't know how this one slipped through our golden cherry net before now! It's our Social media Pick of the Day!
Please share if you enjoyed it too
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This is very stirring, like a
This is very stirring, like a peice of music. I felt almost dizzy reading the words and thinking of those gigantic planets and the associated elements. Wordless companion, you bring them alive beyond the science of dry facts.
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