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Fight for the Throne of the Planet
I chose to view the four so called 'elements' locked in a battle for the planet. In my own mind as I pleaded the case for each I arrived at the final conclusion. An enjoyable creative writing exercise.
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Why Came The Storm So Angry?
Why Came the Storm So Angry? Why came the storm so Angry? From whence did the wild wind blow? That dark and gusty unseen prowler An embryonic...
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Seat M 15
I thought it ironic that the part of my anatomy that some say I use to talk with should rest on a seat with a tale to tell..
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Have a Pea Princess!
My daughter reallly was and sitll is an earth-bound angel, but as a child she stubbornly refused to each vegetables...
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Urania: Star of the Show
I tried to imagine an hierachy amongst the Muses and came up with this.
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I don't know why, but I was
Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015
I don't know why, but I was taken back to images of the moonlight dancing on a lake at midnight. I love poems that take me to a personal, private memory and you beautiful poem did that. Loved it.
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I was moved by this work. I
Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015
I was moved by this work. I realised as I read it, it could have been me that the voice was speaking to. I wasn't always a great partner and caused hurt in the past. Now, work like this reminds me I should have always been more sensitive,...
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Ahh ! Fond memories of my
Posted on Mon, 26 Jan 2015
Ahh ! Fond memories of my teaching days. I left the bullshiters to it last year. The 'target setters' who are more bothered about looking good and their personal careers than those of the children. No wonder the kids do say 'f**k you!' and...
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New to this kind of 'hopping'
Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015
New to this kind of 'hopping' before, but I loved it. Well deserved accolades!
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I for one will be waiting to
Posted on Sat, 27 Dec 2014
I for one will be waiting to read the next instalment. I think this is cleverly written and gives you endless choices as to where it goes next . Loved it.
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I must have read hundreds of
Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014
I must have read hundreds of poems about WW1. Indeed, I studied it briefly during my time at college. Many are bitter and angry poems, but the beauty of this work is the simple, powerful question that for many is yet to be answered 'what for...
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I remember the wall going up
Posted on Sat, 20 Dec 2014
I remember the wall going up and coming down. As I read this, I thought about the many who tried and failed to cross the wall. A great piece of writing. Thank you
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I too stumbled across this
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
I too stumbled across this piece, but I am glad I did. I offer no advice because I don't believe it needs it. This was written from my favourite place - the bottom of your heart and it is a beautiful piece.
Thank you.
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I don't know why, but I was
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014
I don't know why, but I was taken back to an evening class for so-called beginners Welsh. Truth is, it was a gossip club and very clicky. I couldn't handle most of what was said and it was clear that most of the class were far beyond me. So I...
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Belonging etc
Posted on Fri, 19 Sep 2014
This is the kind of writing I find most powerful. You seem to be examining your thoughts and expressing them. People often recoil from being preached to and this piece doesn't. Your essay is more likely to spawn many others on the subject. ...
Read full commentPosted in Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 words
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