forest_for_ever
Primary tabs
Pages
My stories
Odd Sock Lament
Odd Sock Lament Where do all the odd socks go? Paired for life They leave in strife Leaving neatly folded rows Maybe by the washer eaten Or buried ‘...
- Read more about Odd Sock Lament
- 6 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 561 reads
Hide & Seek
Up there in the top 10 of lost and fouind is the humble wallet.
- Read more about Hide & Seek
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 328 reads
Keep Straight On Ahead
The image sums up how I felt that day...lost and going down the drain!
- Read more about Keep Straight On Ahead
- 1 comment
- Log in to post comments
- 173 reads
Fight for the Throne of the Planet
I chose to view the four so called 'elements' locked in a battle for the planet. In my own mind as I pleaded the case for each I arrived at the final conclusion. An enjoyable creative writing exercise.
- Read more about Fight for the Throne of the Planet
- Log in to post comments
- 140 reads
Why Came The Storm So Angry?
Why Came the Storm So Angry? Why came the storm so Angry? From whence did the wild wind blow? That dark and gusty unseen prowler An embryonic...
- Read more about Why Came The Storm So Angry?
- 3 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 307 reads
'May the beaches you are
Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021
'May the beaches you are swept on sing sweet mysteries...' oh boy! what wonderful poetry. For me personally a great poem brings me back again and again. I see something new every time I read it. Your poem takes me into a wonderful dreamworld....
Read full commentPosted in To a Lone Sailor
Fun. I loved it. Thank you.
Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2020
Fun. I loved it. Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in Christmas Rhyme
A winner as usual
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2020
Hi Luigi,
An enchanting poem and an interesting viewpoint (pun intended) of a legendary sea captain. I always love your work.
Graham
Read full commentPosted in Here Be Dragons
I always will love the
Posted on Mon, 24 Jun 2019
I always will love the transition to the beautiful butterfly. One of the miracles of creation. Loved the rhythm.
Read full commentPosted in Mystery in the Chrysalis
Having to swallow pride and
Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2019
Having to swallow pride and go back is so hard... Even more difficult in someways to be met with unconditional love and forgiveness. Great retelling of the parable Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Point of (not 'no-') Return
I really loved the line
Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019
I really loved the line 'vomiting little white horses...' A great piece of work. Your poem was almost Dylanesque in it's descriptive power.
Loved it
Read full commentPosted in Blowing Up the Street (IP)
A beautiful fantasy piece. I
Posted on Mon, 27 May 2019
A beautiful fantasy piece. I love the shape and style of this wonderful piece. Well done! A deserved pick of the day.
forest
Read full commentPosted in The pig nest
As promised I have listened
Posted on Sat, 25 May 2019
As promised I have listened to Kol Nidrei for the first time...I am speechless; save that it will not be the last time I listen to it.
Read full commentPosted in Kol Nidrei
But will I be 'punished' ?
Posted on Sun, 21 Apr 2019
But will I be 'punished' ?
Read full commentPosted in You're So Vane (Vain)
I really enjoyed the
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019
I really enjoyed the alternate perspective of 'dreaming of me' This is a beautiful piece of work and one I read several times.
Thank you for posting it.
forest
Read full commentPosted in Conversation of a Tree
Pages