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The Book: Chapter 36

Alice’s world had shrunk to the size of the book. She stared at the blue glow of her laptop screen, the light making her throbbing headache worse...
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The Book: Chapter 35

Alice and Mick arrived in London on Tuesday morning. The city rose above them with so many tall buildings when they were used to open spaces and...
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The Book: Chapter 34

Alice dragged herself into the hospital, running on fumes and caffeine. She ached from the overnight drive back from London and barely had time to...
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The Book: Chapter 33

London greeted them in the early evening with grey skies and drizzle. Mist wrapped around the old buildings, hiding their secrets. The city was a...
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The Book: Chapter 32

Alice and Mick sat at the dining table, still cluttered with cereal bowls from breakfast, but neither of them cared. The table, usually reserved for...
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You express the mindset well

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020

You express the mindset well and the writing is fluid. Writing is about putting down what you want to say and, whether the views expressed are indeed your views or the views of anybbody reading, is immeterial--they are the views of Grandma. 

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Posted in Echoes Of History : The Grandkids Go On A Tour Of London : (Year Zero + 20): Section 1

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Anthropomorphism at it's best

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

Anthropomorphism at it's best. A lovely story, I like Packham ....Favourite line. 

Sure enough, Mum said “Who’s seven then?” to me, so I’m seven!”

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Posted in Dog Days!*

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This is the sotry of a friend

Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020

This is the sotry of a friend of mine--not a friend, a man who drank in the pub I worked in. He was a millionaire and lived like a tramp. He drank out of lonliness and put away a hundred pound's worth of whiskey a day. He was intelligent and good...

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Posted in A Man

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Your writing is rich and

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2020

Your writing is rich and beautiful. I really liked this. And you made me care about the fox, I hope his leg heals. 

Only one complaint, by the end of the piece he needs a name--he deserves to be named :-)

Favourite line: The ears...

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Posted in The Envy of Footprints

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I love the way this turns

Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2020

I love the way this turns from apparent envy of the other side, to gratitude for what we've got.  Cracking poem, Luigi I enjoyed it.  As to Trump, well what can be said about him other than, Wow, are they all mad? What were they thinking? 

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Posted in Green Grass of Home

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&nbstoday hundreds of people

Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020

&nbstoday hundreds of people gathered at Hollywood Park in close proximity... Covid is done and Ellie is the new black Tommy Robinson is king.. Allegedly. The car park was packed with people wanting to hug him and we have the highest Covid...

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2

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 no, I think it's because

Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020

 no, I think it's because they are animals and race has nothing to with it. I think clan does, be it a family, a race or a gang. In this case a band of businessmen who only think about greasing palms and making money. Objectify a thing... In this...

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2

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I hated my old man...so why

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020

I hated my old man...so why the hell am I invaded by somebody elses? It's four in the morning and I'm up ...again. Maybe I should leave the lot of them here and put myelf in a home.  The guitar is a massive vanity. There's a big live music scene...

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Posted in In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 17 May 2020...2

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Morning Drew, all the very

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Morning Drew, all the very best of luck with Falmingo. I wish you every sucess, lovely. somebody has to be The One, and why not you. Look forward to hearing about your sucess. 

Now about my booking, do you have a pool?.... 

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Posted in Flamingo Dreams

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Good morning, Rachel, good to

Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020

Good morning, Rachel, good to see you again.  I love spiddey people, and as long as I can beat the  iguana and the kitten--I am the designated househoold spiddey catcher, savior of all. We have the most vocal cat in history, he's always yelling...

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