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The Book: Chapter 21
Alice sat in the staffroom, staring at the book. It rarely used her name directly. It was a bastard, using cryptic rhymes and twisted riddles...
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The Book: Chapter 20
The book was back. Alice wasn’t surprised. She knew what it was the second she saw the brown paper parcel on her desk. Its vibration filled her head...
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The Book: Chapter 19
Voudou does her stupidity know no bounds? Oh, she makes me laugh. The arrogance of mortals. They clutch at the unknown with their sweaty hands,...
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The Book: Chapter 18
Alice sat in her car outside the terraced house in Ulverston. She felt the book’s menace pressing against her from inside the bag. It knew she was...
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The Book: Chapter 17
Alice’s life was unbearable. When she put the book down and went upstairs, Mick barely spoke to her. When he did, resentment made her skin crawl. He...
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Harpie doesn't have the power
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
Harpie doesn't have the power to give cherries, nothing to do with her. ...only the cherry fairy can bestow ;-)
Read full commentPosted in Under the Ice (2)
This reads as very precise
Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015
This reads as very precise and old school, as though the poet knows how to be a poet. I enjoyed the mix of passion and nature combined with the elements and a bit of chemistry. Well thought out, well written and well compositioned. Professional...
Read full commentPosted in Night's Fleeting Passions Subsumed
Beautifully melancholy.
Posted on Tue, 03 Mar 2015
Beautifully melancholy.
Read full commentPosted in Shadows on the Stairs
It was a stained- glass blue
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
It was a stained- glass blue today; if I could have tapped it, it would have shattered into a billion million pieces...beautiful
I had cast a cloak of comfort over my family, by casting away the dust. ..your description in this is...
Read full commentPosted in Dust
Plots was offered for sale in
Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015
Plots was offered for sale in the market... not sure if this is intentionall re tone of voice but if not...plots were sold.
The first class washeld on the second floor of Taylor's hall, ...was held.
These letters...
Read full commentPosted in Susannah Woychik's Letters -6 - 1876-7
Brooke was definitely the
Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015
Brooke was definitely the most dominate one out of the five of us...dominant.
During my single-digit years were when I would see a lot of Brooke and Taylor... I see what you're saying here but the sentence couled be...
Read full commentPosted in Favorite (part 1)
And you've done it to me
Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 1970
And you've done it to me again, just geting solidly into it and it stops...but I loved every word. You write with such grace and style. You have a bohemian sophistication that reeks of class even when you're writing down and dirty stuff.
Read full commentPosted in Las Vegas 3
Wow!
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
Wow!
Read full commentPosted in You Are No More...
I mean, how many girls get
Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015
I mean, how many girls get whisked around the world on a flying carpet? He literally knew how to sweep a girl off her feet, unfortunately, later on; I had to learn that there is a lot he sweeps under that carpet too. ...lovely use of metaphor....
Read full commentPosted in Session 4 - Being Married Perspective
The last line of this brought
Posted on Tue, 23 Sep 2014
The last line of this brought tears to my eyes .. but it's early and I was in the office at six forty five and haven't woken up yet, they wre morning tears, I'm not soft really, honest.
Adfverbs and words and phrases like ,rather, and...
Read full commentPosted in Reef 5 - Mayday!
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