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The Book: Chapter 27
Our Alice, always asking the wrong questions and peering into the abyss as if it won’t stare back and wink. You see Mick in your room, good doctor...
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The Book: Chapter 26
She stared at the book. It lay on her desk, unmoving, but, as always, it lurked. It made its presence felt. It was always there, waiting to destroy...
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Chapter 25
Chapter 25 (No missing chapter. I extended chapter 23 and split it into two.) Alice stirred, sensing a presence in her room before she opened her...
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The Book: Chapter 23
‘Betty, may I speak to Tommy?’ Alice asked. ‘No.’ Betty was agitated, her pitchy voice sharper than usual. Her tone carried a beating-stick of...
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The Book: Chapter 22
Alice was delighted when she saw the stunning flower arrangement on her desk. And Mara followed her in with a huge grin on her face. ‘Somebody’s...
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Hi Ewan, good to read you
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Ewan, good to read you again.
How many times did you edit this before posting? If it's less than five, I'm bowing in awe. It reads as ultra polished. It's clean, honed, sharp and reads beautifully. Is it a stand alone or part of a...
Read full commentPosted in 68. Have A Cigar
Hi Rhiannon, long time no
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2020
Hi Rhiannon, long time no read, hope you are well.
Okay, so I've got to say the subject isn't to my taste, pease don't be offended by that, just each to their own and all that and I've checked all my bones and don't have a religious one...
Read full commentPosted in Whatever the mess
Rivita with butter and
Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2018
Rivita with butter and Marmalade, Strong coffe and a cracking little story, what a great Sunday morning.
You built the atmosphere of this well. I like the understated ending ... what the hell had splattered that bottom left?...
Read full commentPosted in The Pitsea Loop
Hello lovely, Good to read
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018
Hello lovely, Good to read you again.
Slight Spoiler!
This is a tale not only of two (102) cities but also two halves. It didn't grab me quickly enough and I think you need to revisit the top third.
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A Visit
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Forgive me for lurching in after months away and posting...I promise to come back and do some reviewing.
Read full commentPosted in Listed
Broken hearts are extroverted
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016
Broken hearts are extroverted in nature…extrovert in nature
maybe she was and cold…maybe she was cold.
release the air hat had ..air that
and soon enough, would her spoiled broken heart start nagging her. Would this read...
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Silencing a Broken Heart
As good a dream sequence as
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016
As good a dream sequence as many. Some nice description.
Read full commentPosted in A.E Book I Arc I The Monster in The Dream
This reminded me of the song,
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
This reminded me of the song, War wihtout Frontiers (I think that's what it's called something about frontiers) Beautiful stark reality and the way most of us feel.
Read full commentPosted in Same shit, different day
Imagine that, a couple so
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
Imagine that, a couple so perfect they synchronize murder.... love this line.
Can't beat agood old tale of darkness and wierdness. Enjoyed this, welcome.
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Pretty words, sad yet hopeful
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015
Pretty words, sad yet hopeful.
Read full commentPosted in Blue Eternal
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