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The Book: Chapter 48
The morning sun shone, gilding the kitchen with the illusion of peace and the promise of finality. The lights hummed, casting golden halos over the...
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The Book Chapter 47
The book had been silent for too long. It refused to give them anything. Alice and Mick had left the courthouse in a haze of failure. The second task...
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The Book: Chapter 46
They didn’t have time to breathe. The soil settled over Tristan’s remains, and the book snapped open. Fresh ink oozed across the page in strong,...
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The Book Chapter 45
The room around Alice was silent. The air mauled her with unseen hands, pressing against her like the weight of history curling at the edges of her...
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The Book: Chapter 44
You thought it was him, didn’t you? I can feel your certainty, Alice. The way you whisper his name and turn every brittle page in search of Brother...
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This is deep, it's a pity we
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
This is deep, it's a pity we don't have a recordings section, (Maybe something to look at, Eds? ) I'd like to hear it performed.
Brilliant meter and energy. I like that every sylable was important and not just input for the rhyme. Great...
Read full commentPosted in Alive N‘ 25*
Crikey .... I posted this
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Crikey .... I posted this like, five minutes ago .. thank you very, very much for the cherry.
Here I am again, that bad penny that turns up wanting people to read and help while I'm in a slump and feeling horribly guilty for another long...
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Too many unpeopled people in
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2025
Too many unpeopled people in the world. I'm a passenger assistant for children with extra needs and some of their stories are heartbreaking. The parents often need as much support as the kids The world can be uncaring in current times. But there'...
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Beautiful imagery. One of my
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Beautiful imagery. One of my dogs flatly refused to go out in it. I had to stand outside with him. I love a good storm and don't ever remember being afraid of them as a child. I was terrified of ghosts in my room.
Lovely, Jenny.
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Beautiful Richard. We live
Posted on Wed, 09 Aug 2023
Beautiful Richard. We live near the beach and every word of this rang true for me. Thank you for the read.
Favourite phrase: Seaweed carpets of wet sand.
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I enjoyed this. Great writing
Posted on Tue, 08 Aug 2023
I enjoyed this. Great writing and told just as is. I did a stint working to the rigid timescales you described as an interviewer at home. I loved it, but towards the end, had hubby's dad living with us. He had dementia and needed constant care,...
Read full commentPosted in There’s a new sick line, for calling in sick apparently! By Alfred Muggins, Call Centre Agent!
This is what I found on the
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
This is what I found on the .GOV website. (I use them for most of my policies and whatnot) it only seems to apply to sex offenders and domestic abuse. But because Max had sex with at least one of the victims, I went with it. I looked at half a...
Read full commentPosted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 19
Yes, I'll edit and tidy it. I
Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2023
Yes, I'll edit and tidy it. I aimed to cut off at the scene break, but fat fingers must have got in the way :)
Thanks Insert, done.
Read full commentPosted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 11 (a)
Thank you, Insert. I'm so
Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023
Thank you, Insert. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. Do you know, I shot myself right in the foot. This was never meant to be a series, it was just an idea that grew arms and legs on me. If I'd been serious about it, I'd have made him...
Read full commentPosted in Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 9 ( b)
A fascinating piece. It's
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023
A fascinating piece. It's great reading about other people's lives,especially when it's something positive like this.
Thank you for the read.
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