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Silas Nash book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 29
The knock at the door was timid, and there was a whirring in Max’s head that wouldn’t go away. The tinnitus was getting worse, but it wasn’t that. It...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 28
Max was meeting Nash at the station. He was in time to see the senior officer wrestling somebody further down the street. He heard the bloke asking...
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Silas Nash book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 27
Lawson said, ‘Boss, they’re waiting for you with the suspect in Interview Room Three.’ ‘Who’ve we got?’ ‘No idea, boss.’ Nash felt his heart rate...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 26
When Nash rounded the corner at Happy Mount Park, he swung into a parking bay at the farthest point from the bustle of the busy parts of the prom...
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Silas Nash Book 1: Hush Hush Honeysuckle: Chapter 25
Nash tapped the desk as he listened to the ringing on the end of the line. He didn’t think Jones was going to answer. ‘Jesus, can’t a man pleasure...
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A well-rounded story that
Posted on Sun, 25 Jun 2023
A well-rounded story that children would love. I can visualise the image for it.
Who doesn't love Sweets?
Now, about this island, you didn't say which body of water it was in? Asking for a friend, you understand.
Read full commentRespectfully...
Posted in The land of candy and lollipops
You express the mindset well
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020
You express the mindset well and the writing is fluid. Writing is about putting down what you want to say and, whether the views expressed are indeed your views or the views of anybbody reading, is immeterial--they are the views of Grandma.
Read full commentPosted in Echoes Of History : The Grandkids Go On A Tour Of London : (Year Zero + 20): Section 1
Anthropomorphism at it's best
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
Anthropomorphism at it's best. A lovely story, I like Packham ....Favourite line.
Sure enough, Mum said “Who’s seven then?” to me, so I’m seven!”
Read full commentPosted in Dog Days!*
This is the sotry of a friend
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2020
This is the sotry of a friend of mine--not a friend, a man who drank in the pub I worked in. He was a millionaire and lived like a tramp. He drank out of lonliness and put away a hundred pound's worth of whiskey a day. He was intelligent and good...
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Your writing is rich and
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2020
Your writing is rich and beautiful. I really liked this. And you made me care about the fox, I hope his leg heals.
Only one complaint, by the end of the piece he needs a name--he deserves to be named :-)
Favourite line: The ears...
Read full commentPosted in The Envy of Footprints
I love the way this turns
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2020
I love the way this turns from apparent envy of the other side, to gratitude for what we've got. Cracking poem, Luigi I enjoyed it. As to Trump, well what can be said about him other than, Wow, are they all mad? What were they thinking?
Read full commentPosted in Green Grass of Home
&nbstoday hundreds of people
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020
&nbstoday hundreds of people gathered at Hollywood Park in close proximity... Covid is done and Ellie is the new black Tommy Robinson is king.. Allegedly. The car park was packed with people wanting to hug him and we have the highest Covid...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2
no, I think it's because
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020
no, I think it's because they are animals and race has nothing to with it. I think clan does, be it a family, a race or a gang. In this case a band of businessmen who only think about greasing palms and making money. Objectify a thing... In this...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Monday 25 May 2020...2
I hated my old man...so why
Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020
I hated my old man...so why the hell am I invaded by somebody elses? It's four in the morning and I'm up ...again. Maybe I should leave the lot of them here and put myelf in a home. The guitar is a massive vanity. There's a big live music scene...
Read full commentPosted in In a World Gone Mad: Sunday 17 May 2020...2
Morning Drew, all the very
Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020
Morning Drew, all the very best of luck with Falmingo. I wish you every sucess, lovely. somebody has to be The One, and why not you. Look forward to hearing about your sucess.
Now about my booking, do you have a pool?....
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