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Xion Island Carrier: Chapter One.

By Sooz006 on Tue, 08 Apr 2025

Xion Island Carrier Chapter 1 I am filled with hatred. It’s a state of being that engulfs me, and this island isn’t dissimilar to my mind. Both are...

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The Book: Chapter 51

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

You’re next!

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The Book: Chapter 51

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Hi. Yes, you, my reader. Don’t be shy. I’m glad you could make it. Let’s not bore each other with names. You’ve read my story. Sad, but true, and let...

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The Book: Chapter 50

By Sooz006 on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

The room was sterile, though Mick had tried to make it homely with a few personal touches, but there’s only so much you can do against the colours he...

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Plots was offered for sale in

Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015

Plots was offered for sale in the market... not sure if this is intentionall re tone of voice but if not...plots were sold.

The first class washeld on the second floor of Taylor's hall, ...was held.

These letters...

Posted in Susannah Woychik's Letters -6 - 1876-7

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Brooke was definitely the

Posted on Mon, 16 Feb 2015

Brooke was definitely the most dominate one out of the five of us...dominant.

During my single-digit years were when I would see a lot of Brooke and Taylor... I see what you're saying here but the sentence couled be...

Posted in Favorite (part 1)

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And you've done it to me

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 1970

And you've done it to me again, just geting solidly into it and it stops...but I loved every word. You write with such grace and style. You have a bohemian sophistication that reeks of class even when you're writing down and dirty stuff.

Posted in Las Vegas 3

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Wow!

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

Wow!

Posted in You Are No More...

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I mean, how many girls get

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

I mean, how many girls get whisked around the world on a flying carpet? He literally knew how to sweep a girl off her feet, unfortunately, later on; I had to learn that there is a lot he sweeps under that carpet too. ...lovely use of metaphor....

Posted in Session 4 - Being Married Perspective

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The last line of this brought

Posted on Tue, 23 Sep 2014

The last line of this brought tears to my eyes .. but it's early and I was in the office at six forty five and haven't woken up yet, they wre morning tears, I'm not soft really, honest.

Adfverbs and words and phrases like ,rather, and...

Posted in Reef 5 - Mayday!

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This is the first of these

Posted on Sun, 21 Sep 2014

This is the first of these that I've read... beautiful writing. I loved every word of this. I'm also writing a dog story, but mine's darker. I'll be looking out for more of these.

Just one tiny thing, perhaps you could number...

Posted in Reef 3 - The Boat

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TV critics as a masterpiece

Posted on Mon, 03 Mar 2014

TV critics as a masterpiece unlikely ever to be equalled with some rating her show ,,, I'd put a comma after equalled.

guard of pastry chefs help their serving spoons at half mast...held?

Oh, come on Eton Mess witout a...

Posted in The Golden Spoon Award

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Little Ally’s head felt fuzzy

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2013

Little Ally’s head felt fuzzy… I’d keep the prefix ‘little’ for dialogue. When the narrator is referring to her as little Ally it gets a bit sickly. It’s like in the soaps when the baby’s always Baby so and so. ‘Who’s having Baby Jack tonight?’...

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Ally’s job was to say the

Posted on Thu, 28 Nov 2013

Ally’s job was to say the Lord’s Prayer as quickly as she could so that the monsters under the beds didn’t reach their bony fingers up, grab her by the ankle and pull her down underneath the floor to the great pit. …..Celt, I swear to you, I did...