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Story | BREAK DOWN OF A BREAKDOWN | kheldar | 4 | 5 months 2 weeks ago |
Story | I Have an Iron Bound Chest | Hourhouse | 10 | 2 years 12 months ago |
Story | THE KIND OF AND MIND OF A MALE. | kheldar | 2 | 5 years 1 month ago |
Story | I Can See You...Postscript | kheldar | 0 | 5 years 10 months ago |
Story | I Can See You... | kheldar | 0 | 5 years 10 months ago |
Story | THE PHONECALL: WHEN LIFE SUKS | kheldar | 0 | 5 years 11 months ago |
Story | JANUARY | kheldar | 0 | 5 years 11 months ago |
Story | Self Hatred | kheldar | 0 | 6 years 6 days ago |
Story | I HEARD A HOOF | kheldar | 0 | 6 years 3 weeks ago |
Story | WRITING IN THE MOONLIGHT | kheldar | 0 | 6 years 1 month ago |
Story | ALL HALLOWS EVE | kheldar | 0 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | I COULDN’T SCREAM! | kheldar | 1 | 6 years 2 months ago |
Story | THE INSIDE OUTSIDER | kheldar | 1 | 6 years 3 months ago |
Story | SIDEKICKS, SERVANTS AND SECOND FIDDLES | kheldar | 2 | 6 years 5 months ago |
Story | Untitled | kheldar | 2 | 6 years 5 months ago |
Story | LILY LILAC KILLED MY WIFE!!! | kheldar | 0 | 6 years 5 months ago |
Story | The vanity of the ideal Youth. | SqueakyDuck | 5 | 7 years 8 months ago |
Story | Nika | loquaciousicity | 3 | 7 years 9 months ago |
Story | The Perfect Spot | kheldar | 0 | 8 years 4 months ago |
Story | The Finlay Moss Five Minute Rule | kheldar | 2 | 8 years 4 months ago |
Story | I couldn't bear for you to be cold | seashore | 21 | 8 years 4 months ago |
Story | STANDING UPON THE SHOULDERS OF GIANTS | kheldar | 6 | 8 years 9 months ago |
Story | As good as it gets | AliciaB | 7 | 8 years 11 months ago |
Story | Fallen Angel | kheldar | 4 | 9 years 4 months ago |
Story | The Ballad of Bill McNally | kheldar | 5 | 9 years 8 months ago |
Hi Terry,
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2015
Hi Terry,
Hi Terry,
I really like this poem - it has the intense hit of an espresso but the lingering pleasure of a caramel macchiato. Having said this, I hope you won't mind me raising a couple of points:
In the second...
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