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You've captured the persona
Posted on Fri, 24 Nov 2017
You've captured the persona of a man who wishes to suffer in silence. This is how I read this poingnant poem. Hope I didn't get what you were trying to say out of context.
You've captured the persona
Posted on Fri, 24 Nov 2017
You've captured the persona of a man who wishes to suffer in silence. This is how I read this poingnant poem. Hope I didn't get what you were trying to say out of context.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A Serious Man
There's boundless energy and
Posted on Sun, 19 Nov 2017
There's boundless energy and passion in this poem that drew me in straight away.
Beautiful poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Come With Me
I like how you write the
Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2017
I like how you write the reflection of the moon in the first stanza, very original.
Going from autumn to winter written so magically, and very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Autumn/Winter Haiku's - 2
A pure joy to read. Jenny.
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2017
A pure joy to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Easy Sax. By MarciaMarcia
Posted on Mon, 06 Nov 2017
It's one of the hardest tasks to deal with and I honestly feel for you having been through it myself.
Your mum was constant reader of work here on abc tales, she will be remembered for her great strength.
Let Bee's name...
Read full commentPosted in Closing the accounts of the late Deborah Hambrook
Enjoyed reading this poem
Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017
Enjoyed reading this poem very much.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in All Hallow’s Day
A chilling read indeed. I
Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017
A chilling read indeed. I think there has to be a moral to this story, but just can't think of one at the moment.
Very original too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Cheetah
It's good to remember those
Posted on Wed, 18 Oct 2017
It's good to remember those we've lost at this time of year. May his memory be your comfort.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Big 7-0
Now I'm intrigued as to what
Posted on Sat, 07 Oct 2017
Now I'm intrigued as to what's down the stairwell and behind the metal pressure door. Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The girl with the Maroon lipstick (excerpt from Eagles Hunt Wolves) PART 2
I thought this was so spiritual
Posted on Fri, 29 Sep 2017
I thought this was so spiritual. I love how Amynedd rescued Aled from his guilt.
Thank you for sharing this story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Girl on a Bicycle
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