it's so sad that we won't be hearing from him again. I did read many of his fairy tales, though didn't always leave a comment...wish I had now. I agree with you, I don't know how he kept writing when ill. It proves he enjoyed...
I like this poem, it's comfortable to read. Makes me think of two people who understand each other and are relaxed enough to let each other do their own thing, yet come together when the time is right.
I know exactly what your saying, especially in that last line. As I get older it becomes obvious that life is repeated over and over by generations of people coming up behind me, walking in my shadow.
Funnily enough my partner's going night fishing with his son this weekend, so I expect he will be sitting thinking of me and I of him. Nice thoughtful poem.
Oh Penny, I so enjoyed reading this piece. Your shared thoughts reminded me of my own dad and how I felt when he sadly died and having to sort out the many records in his collection. Did your dad play the piano? If he did then again you would...
Some wonderful use of words
Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018
Some wonderful use of words Rhiannon, I could feel the storm unfolding.
Jenny.
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Insight into your own
Posted on Thu, 02 Aug 2018
Insight into your own awareness is how I read your poem.
Jenny.
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Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2018
Hello Di,
it's so sad that we won't be hearing from him again. I did read many of his fairy tales, though didn't always leave a comment...wish I had now. I agree with you, I don't know how he kept writing when ill. It proves he enjoyed...
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So pleased to see this with
Posted on Sun, 22 Jul 2018
So pleased to see this with gold cherries. Congrats to you Richard.
Well deserved.
Jenny.
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I like this poem, it's
Posted on Sun, 22 Jul 2018
I like this poem, it's comfortable to read. Makes me think of two people who understand each other and are relaxed enough to let each other do their own thing, yet come together when the time is right.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in HERE I SIT
I know exactly what your
Posted on Wed, 18 Jul 2018
I know exactly what your saying, especially in that last line. As I get older it becomes obvious that life is repeated over and over by generations of people coming up behind me, walking in my shadow.
At least that's how I read it. A...
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Some wonderful use of
Posted on Sat, 14 Jul 2018
Some wonderful use of metaphors here like:-
To a pond that softly brooks and whispers,
Like nut-brown skin that lolls across
settees of dappled
sun.
Very much enjoyed your poem and thank you for sharing....
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Funnily enough my partner's
Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2018
Funnily enough my partner's going night fishing with his son this weekend, so I expect he will be sitting thinking of me and I of him. Nice thoughtful poem.
Jenny.
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Oh Penny, I so enjoyed
Posted on Tue, 03 Jul 2018
Oh Penny, I so enjoyed reading this piece. Your shared thoughts reminded me of my own dad and how I felt when he sadly died and having to sort out the many records in his collection. Did your dad play the piano? If he did then again you would...
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You sum up perfectly the
Posted on Sat, 16 Jun 2018
You sum up perfectly the feelings of both siblings and parent. I could feel all those frustrations that give rise to emotions.
Jenny.
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