What a great story, I loved hearing about the dwellers of Ochre-ridge. Some wonderful metaphors within the story too. This kind of reminded me of something that Dylan Thomas would write.
the words are those that I can relate to, when you love someone so deeply that they've been a part of your life for so long, it's hard to imagine them not there. Yes...this definitely bought a...
I never really had any ambitions as a small child, but can relate to the pudding basin hair cut. Though later on when I was sixteen I joined amateur dramatics. I was in a play...
Hi there Dynamaso,
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
Hi there Dynamaso,
great poem with rhythm and rhyme.
You show that the written word can take us many places that we had no idea existed, till we actually come to think about and write them down.
Jenny.
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Hi Elsie,
Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2014
Hi Elsie,
A great snap of a holiday in writing. Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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A gripping read, the moral
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
A gripping read, the moral of this story is. Don't meddle in things that don't concern you.
Well done.
Jenny.
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What a great story, I loved
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2014
What a great story, I loved hearing about the dwellers of Ochre-ridge. Some wonderful metaphors within the story too. This kind of reminded me of something that Dylan Thomas would write.
Brilliant read and very much enjoyed.
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Hi there RADDman,
Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014
Hi there RADDman,
I too thought this had a touch of Animal Farm to it. Had this picture in my mind of cows at a Union Meeting as I was reading...very funny! ...
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You've captured so much love
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014
You've captured so much love in your words. This was a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The start of something new
There's such saddness in this
Posted on Fri, 08 Aug 2014
There's such saddness in this poem Tina,
the words are those that I can relate to, when you love someone so deeply that they've been a part of your life for so long, it's hard to imagine them not there. Yes...this definitely bought a...
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A poingnant poem written from
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2014
A poingnant poem written from the heart, that leaves the reader with much food for thought.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in How Should We Mark The Place They Fell?
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014
Hi Tina,
I read this piece with great interest.
I never really had any ambitions as a small child, but can relate to the pudding basin hair cut. Though later on when I was sixteen I joined amateur dramatics. I was in a play...
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Hi Tina,
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
Hi Tina,
great piece of writing here. I've never been to Battersea Power Station, but the album cover is amazing.
You brought back some wonderful memories of going to see Pink Floyd perform Animals at the Wembly Staduim. What a...
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