And none can tell what agony he suffered in that agonizing crucifixion. Yes, helped, but do not underestimate prolonging torture, slow extinction of...
His job to put fresh food waste out (and through the day she piled the lot into a bowl upon the shelf) but often he forgot. One day he heard her give a shout – ‘Where is my salad bowl …
In the midst of it all, there are some good leaders of industry, who actually do have respect from their workforce, who do probably (or some of them!) acknowldege their debt to good leadership. (a bit like those households in the days of slavery...
I like the way you describe the smile – genuine, creases round the eyes, with a private twinkle in the eye – that describes well the sharing of warmth, acceptance, sense of love, that is so missed if it's just a facial smile, feelings hidden....
Terry, I think you'd get a lot more reads and analysis if you posted them as a series (maybe making them into a collection), say one every other day. Each could be read quite quickly then and maybe reread and thought about. (I know they're...
Marcia this is lovely and clever, the arrangements really works. Are you meaning this for Poetry Monthly which is all about visual poetry (see under 'blogs' at RH edge of page)? Usually we are encouraged to put (Poetry Monthly) in brackets in the...
You've again skilfully woven your tale, with rhythm and rhyme, and many sharp points being made (eg the counterparts of diamonds, hearts, are never clubs or spades.)
When there are injustices seeming done, and conclusions maybe...
Men searching, seeking to understand … get a glimpse, but can't see the whole of the answer … only supernatural revelation can do that, fill in the gaps, even help us understand the words we are told, or as much as we need to know. Rhiannon
Well, you seem to have made
Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016
Well, you seem to have made this 'memory film' live to the reader, anyway! I felt quite envious of the 'picking up a pig' incident. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Happy Days
In the midst of it all, there
Posted on Sun, 03 Jan 2016
In the midst of it all, there are some good leaders of industry, who actually do have respect from their workforce, who do probably (or some of them!) acknowldege their debt to good leadership. (a bit like those households in the days of slavery...
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I didn't think about the
Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2016
I didn't think about the title until afterwards, either. I like attempts at 'autobiography of a …' on inanimate objects. Unusual, but fun. Rhiannon
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You are able at triggering
Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2015
You are able at triggering others to the ordinary pleasures we can enjoy every day, and have enjoyed through all the days of life. Rhiannon
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I like the way you describe
Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015
I like the way you describe the smile – genuine, creases round the eyes, with a private twinkle in the eye – that describes well the sharing of warmth, acceptance, sense of love, that is so missed if it's just a facial smile, feelings hidden....
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Terry, I think you'd get a
Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2015
Terry, I think you'd get a lot more reads and analysis if you posted them as a series (maybe making them into a collection), say one every other day. Each could be read quite quickly then and maybe reread and thought about. (I know they're...
Read full commentPosted in Eugene and the Pumpkin Pie
Marcia this is lovely and
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
Marcia this is lovely and clever, the arrangements really works. Are you meaning this for Poetry Monthly which is all about visual poetry (see under 'blogs' at RH edge of page)? Usually we are encouraged to put (Poetry Monthly) in brackets in the...
Read full commentPosted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"
You've again skilfully woven
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
You've again skilfully woven your tale, with rhythm and rhyme, and many sharp points being made (eg the counterparts of diamonds, hearts, are never clubs or spades.)
Read full commentWhen there are injustices seeming done, and conclusions maybe...
Posted in Shut-Down City
an encouragement to cherish
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
an encouragement to cherish the good memories, and lay some down - in our own lives and in others'. Rhiannon
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Men searching, seeking to
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
Men searching, seeking to understand … get a glimpse, but can't see the whole of the answer … only supernatural revelation can do that, fill in the gaps, even help us understand the words we are told, or as much as we need to know. Rhiannon
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