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StoryCosmos Rhiannonw136 years 3 months ago
StoryIt is in Death that I Found Life GhostKing101J26 years 3 months ago
StoryPerspective. Maxine Jasmin-Green26 years 3 months ago
StoryIs This True? Maxine Jasmin-Green66 years 3 months ago
StorySomehow We Are All Equal On Holiday David Kirtley36 years 3 months ago
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StoryMasking HarryC36 years 3 months ago
StoryFrom Roadside Richard L. Prov...56 years 3 months ago
StoryAutumn Splash Rhiannonw156 years 3 months ago
StoryWhat to Do Richard L. Prov...66 years 3 months ago
StoryWill you give me a fresh start? Rhiannonw56 years 3 months ago

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Labyrinthine Hierarchy

By Rhiannonw on Fri, 18 Sep 2020

Layers of authority, avoid responsibility, the ‘buck’ lands nowhere, no-one knows the whole, no-one knows the enquirer, ‘chinese whispers’ muddle all...
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Ignoring God when life is easy

By Rhiannonw on Sun, 13 Sep 2020

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] It is so easy not to bother when life is pleasant, easy, not give a thought at all to wonder ‘Is there a God … But when a tragedy comes sweeping … why do so many turn to blaming the God they’d been denying? …
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A Three-year old’s Imaginative Cave

By Rhiannonw on Tue, 08 Sep 2020

Six doors and a tiny window …
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When I am afraid …

By Rhiannonw on Sun, 06 Sep 2020

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Sometimes you see I am afraid because of things in stories said, remembering silly things I’ve read: And...
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The benefit of a short walk

By Rhiannonw on Mon, 31 Aug 2020

A short walk at last from village out to weir …
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Autobiography
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I thought it was a dog, but

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2015

I thought it was a dog, but it seemed to be a cat! Liked the digging and the perfume. But wasn't sure about the 'his' in the last line - is it the husband having nine lives or should it be 'your' referring to the cat? Maybe I'm totally wrong, if...

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Posted in The Prodigal

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What a lovely little inciden

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

What a lovely little inciden capturedt! Was it a green woodpecker? I gather they do hammer sometime but my husband used to tell me, if it's the hammering you hear, then it's the greater spotted. He keeps having to turn my attention to it anyway,...

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Posted in Spotted at Dawn

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It's lovely what you took in

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015

It's lovely what you took in in your micro-glance, refreshing you for the rest of your journey. Rhiannon

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Posted in The A1 Crosses the River Swale

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 A lot to think about there,

Posted on Sat, 21 Feb 2015

 A lot to think about there, and well written of course. How difficult to live with great skill, humbly and kindly. Rhiannon

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Posted in "All the World's a Stage"

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I can only say, how

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015

I can only say, how compassionate and caring the staff are where my father-in-law is. (and it is just a basic nursing home, largely council funded, they have recently introduced a very minimal top-up and of course there is always means testing)....

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Posted in Room Six - Tooting Bec Asylum...1982

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I really liked the way you

Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015

I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...

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Posted in uncorrected proof two.

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Horrible, Bee. Getting

Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015

Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon

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Posted in Giving Them a VOICE

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A lot of concentrated vivid

Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015

A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon

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Posted in Earth Heart (3)

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Interesting cameo of bright

Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015

Interesting cameo of bright memories, a bit like Jolono's recent 'Under a London Sky' memories of the beginning of a courtship. I liked ''Occasion marked: Us and 'Coat-hanger tourists' too. The Brolga Dance certainly sounded...

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Posted in Brolga Dance

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Your collection of images in

Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015

Your collection of images in the early part of this is breathtaking as usual, and displays your noticing eye and clarity of putting the images into words succinctly for others.

– but poetry can be about all sorts of things, the pleasant,...

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Posted in Ars Poetica

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