Take Me Home (for Kathleen)
By threeleafshamrock
Mon, 08 Feb 2010
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Take me home, while there is still time
and let me sit upon the shore.
Let the westerly gales dance with my hair,
redden my cheeks and let Atlantic spray salt my lips.
Take me from this chair; this conspicuous carriage
and seat me on the sand -
that I might play among the grains of life
and slow them, even slightly, on their tumbling journey.
When my sun has set, raise me to its fiery glow,
though I cling, as the molluscs to their rock,
let me go; for I am done and you have done
all that you could ...and more than you could know.
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Though it's no consolation,
Though it's no consolation, I found this poem truly beautiful.
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Chris, the last line then is
Chris, the last line then is especially appropiate, my heart goes out to you, I agree with Ewan,
Shirley xx
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Chris I agree with Ewan too,
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Chris I agree with Ewan too, and I hope you've been able to read this to Kathleen. What a lovely thing to do for her. xxx
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sadness, thoughts and love
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
sadness, thoughts and love with you xxxxx
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I agree with Ewan truely
I agree with Ewan truely beautiful and my thoughts and love are also with you Beeme xx
k.
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Speechless, apart from
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Speechless, apart from echoing Ewan's words. My heart speaks volumes and I think you can hear it, Chris.
Tina xxx
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My thoughts are with you and
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My thoughts are with you and your family, Chris. This is a truly moving and beautiful poem and one I hope will give you strength in days to come.
Magic xxx
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'that I might play among the
'that I might play among the grains of life'
stunning.
My thoughts are with you, love,
J x
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I'm very sorry for your
I'm very sorry for your loss, Chris. My love and sympathy to you and your family.
k.
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Thinking of you, Chris and I
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Thinking of you, Chris and I can only echo Beeme's words.
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"peacefully at home" love
"peacefully at home" love and sympathy to you and your family.
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So sorry, Chris, thank you
So sorry, Chris, thank you for letting us know, at least it was a merciful end.
J x
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