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Knights Of the Keyboard To the Defence of Ukraine (Part 2) by Alfred N.Muggins
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5 th of April 2022 Be careful those of us who wish to use Facebook to counter the Russian paid ‘Trolls’, who seem to be operating on the comments to...
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Knights Of the Keyboard To the Defence of Ukraine (Part 1) by Alfred N.Muggins
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4/4/22 (edited and added to up to 24/4/22) Alfred commented in response to a possible (i.e. very likely) Russian Paid Troll on Facebook on a...
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Sleeping Beauties (On Holiday In Turkey!) by Alfred N.Muggins
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14/5/22 Alfred went out of the bedroom, not for the first time that morning, after a number of important visits to the bathroom. This time he was on...
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In The Court Of The Crimson King by Alfred N. Muggins
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13/4/22 Alfred finally realised, after 53 years since its release, who the 21 st Century Schizoid Man really was! Admittedly he didn’t really...
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Turkish Dancing Part 2: Coming To Terms With (Temporary!) Life In Turkey (and in particular how to manage your holiday money in a Strange Land!) by Alfred N.Muggins
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14/5/22 Alfred was becoming very seduced by the Turkish Music – even by Turkish forms of rap, hip hop and dance on the boat trip they went on the day...
I did enjoy this piece. The
Posted on Tue, 01 Jan 2019
I did enjoy this piece. The difficulties of modern life and the worries of unforeseen health issues were well explained.
Read full commentPosted in Help For Hero's.
Very appropriate I think to
Posted on Sun, 11 Nov 2018
Very appropriate I think to bring these issues together on Remembrance Day. I enjoyed and was interested to read the tales of the lives of your grandfather and father with the subject of homelessness which so often seems to afflict veterans and...
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Very funny. I enjoyed that!
Posted on Tue, 19 Jun 2018
Very funny. I enjoyed that!
Read full commentPosted in Britney and Shania
Thanks for your comment Elsie
Posted on Fri, 29 Dec 2017
Thanks for your comment Elsie. I agree we seem to have moved forward from the clinical academic marking exercise approach to literary criticism, which has got to be good news. I think we give more of a personal response now on abctales....
Read full commentPosted in Have We Written Too Much?
Good piece, very effective.
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016
Good piece, very effective.
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I like the simple and direct
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
I like the simple and direct message and delivery of this poem.
Read full commentPosted in 25/11/2015
Your story is developing well
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
Your story is developing well with surprising twists. There was no explanation of why she chose to awake or use Antares. How did she know about this demon? It might be worth including a sentence or two on these questions.
Read full commentAlso I think it...
Posted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
A promising story, encourages
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
A promising story, encourages me to read further. I do think that second long paragraph needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs. You have the mother's disappearance and the father's death both in the same paragraph, but they are different...
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