let my dreams flow flow round-and-round warmly dearest tightly darling maiden dream flowing around your dreams my arms in love warmly safely tenderly...
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BOLD
Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2024
BOLD
Sounds like a multiple personality disorder? Not nessarilly a good and a bad one, they can all three be good why not? or all of them bad. Can't believe everthing in the films. There's much more too it.
Beautiful Rhiannon you are only improving, more mature writing, serious poetry, excellent! This is one of my favourite church songs as I remember the words,
softly and tenderly jesus is calling, calling for you and for me
Have you thought of in, "the word for life" it refers to the word's life, not yours? Could explain it. I also know how frustrating it can get battling on with old and damaged unreliable stuff, The story of my "life'.
For a moment I thought it is Easter but I saw it is only August! Not Christnmas either. The story is told beautiful in your poem/hymn in such lovely verse. Excellent.
The second coming is to be in the same way, from the clouds and in...
BOLD
Posted on Mon, 26 Aug 2024
BOLD
Sounds like a multiple personality disorder? Not nessarilly a good and a bad one, they can all three be good why not? or all of them bad. Can't believe everthing in the films. There's much more too it.
Cheers && Nolan
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softly and tenderly
Posted on Sun, 29 Sep 2024
Beautiful Rhiannon you are only improving, more mature writing, serious poetry, excellent! This is one of my favourite church songs as I remember the words,
softly and tenderly jesus is calling, calling for you and for me
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pentecost
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
The last stanza sounds like pentecost. Keep well! & Nolan
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excellent description
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
An excellent description I almost feel the wind. Very well written.
Excellent. See you & Nolan
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word's life
Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2024
Have you thought of in, "the word for life" it refers to the word's life, not yours? Could explain it. I also know how frustrating it can get battling on with old and damaged unreliable stuff, The story of my "life'.
Nolan &
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a robin red breast
Posted on Mon, 16 Sep 2024
a robin red breast in a cage, puts all of hewaven in a rage, WB
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Jazz is good music
Posted on Wed, 28 Aug 2024
Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose, nothing 's not worth nothing but it's free
Jazz is good music especially the classics, go stagger Lee! .The strolling bones were here the other day, sad, just for a few bucks...
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calvery
Posted on Sun, 25 Aug 2024
For a moment I thought it is Easter but I saw it is only August! Not Christnmas either. The story is told beautiful in your poem/hymn in such lovely verse. Excellent.
The second coming is to be in the same way, from the clouds and in...
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inspired
Posted on Sun, 18 Aug 2024
Beautiful Rhiannon! Inspired. It's lovely. Perfect.
Two men look through the bars, one sees the mud the other the stars.
See you && Nolan
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Certainly an excellent poem
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024
Certainly an excellent poem I read it a few times. Do you know the famous tragic poem of Goethe "Erlkonich? They don't make them like they used to.
Keep well! Be good! Nolan
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