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Song of the Oh So Knowing
For anyone who might know a poet. X
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This Too - (poetry monthly)
When raging rivers burst their banks and torrents churn in filthy threats to life and limb, doors are bolted; blocked with sand and by a candle's...
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Textension
All at a distance
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Radioactivation
Heading toward the end of this 'Journey' writing - promise. x
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I liked this story a lot, and
Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015
I liked this story a lot, and enjoyed the way it was written, but I thought the end was a little weak. Like, how would they know he'd take them there - he could have gone down any chip shop? Just my thinking. And then again, he mightn't have...
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This poem starts for me on
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
This poem starts for me on line three. A sweet expression of love.
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Love the continuation of her
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015
Love the continuation of her life. Lovely description with wistful feeling behind it all.
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I enjoyed reading this, like
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015
I enjoyed reading this, like your philosophy - and I do wish you well - for every day.
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I found this poem to be
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
I found this poem to be thoughtful and interesting.
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Really tells the story and
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
Really tells the story of the day - and scenery. Could you do a recording of this one, Rhiannon? It would work so well with all those rhymes. I'd love to hear you read it.
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From the beauty of a single
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
From the beauty of a single flame to so much destruction where the most destructive of all gets, deservedly, the least mention in this wonderfully descriptive poem. I absolutely loved the opening line, the sounds in the first stanza, and images...
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What a wonderful flow of
Posted on Mon, 23 Nov 2015
What a wonderful flow of sound and rhyme.
Read full commentPosted in The Journey to End all Journeys (Poetry Monthly)
Took my breath away reading.
Posted on Sun, 22 Nov 2015
Took my breath away reading. Something cold in the stark delivery... Described beauty.
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Beautiful and delicately done
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
Beautiful and delicately done.
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