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The Time Saver's Daughter
Tomorrow, just another day, but tor her...
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The Time Saver
Chinks nicked here and there fell amongst the change he couldn't pocket - should have spent it. Enjoyed odd stolen moments - could have, should have...
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A poem to Silver Spun Sand
A flock of lovelies yodeled over and I thought of her...
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Life Lessens
Posted a first draft of this, then read it and thought, what were you thinking! Then removed it. So here is a hopefully, improved, or at least, less crap edit.
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Wanna - (poetry monthly)
Gotta
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Even borders are no barriers
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2016
Even borders are no barriers where passion can be so easily ignighted by the senses. After the 'satisfaction' achieved alone, the last line can be taken in a couple of ways. Either - alone until we meet again, or - as in signing out - until we...
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The last line finishes this
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2016
The last line finishes this off so neatly. Looking back on such companionship is so strongly inside us that the slightest trigger such as similar weather and scents of the changing seasons zoom us back into any given moment. I loved this. I'm...
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Oh my goodness! That last,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jan 2016
Oh my goodness! That last, you can't even answer that or theyll smile knowingly like you've just made their point. You can't win. And I hate when someone starts with - 'I don't mean to be rude, ' or 'don't take offense, but...' You just know it's...
Read full commentPosted in Shut it (and other words)
Hi Tina.
Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016
Hi Tina.
I couldn't stop thinking of the idea of this continuous repeat - the piece meandering off course to a non specific end. Guess it would still be Da capo al fine, but by then we wouldn't notice. I thought this was clever, and as...
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Unless others depend on you.
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2016
Unless others depend on you.
Read full commentPosted in don't worry
This seems a lot about
Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2016
This seems a lot about acceptance - the hardest thing to acheive. compassionately written. Keep recalling and writing, Tina, and don't worry too much about keeping sane - it's not all it's cracked up to be - apparently... Not that I'd know.
Read full commentPosted in Days Like These
Hi Vesper.
Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2016
Hi Vesper.
You have this as a poem, but for me it reads better as prose. A few typos to look out for...
Read full commentPosted in Coffee and Croissants
Well in that case, I don't
Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2016
Well in that case, I don't think you should cut down on drinking, you just need to write more.
Very much enjoyed reading this.
Cheers Rich x
Read full commentPosted in Belly Up
What a wonderfully told story
Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2016
What a wonderfully told story. You are an artist with your word painting Tina. I found this a very moving story.
Read full commentPosted in To Glimpse a Butterfly
Your story is amazing because
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2016
Your story is amazing because each and every line encapsulates so much information - very originall, and almost feels like a poem - emotion included. Best thing I've read in yonks.
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