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Like There's No Tomorrow (poetry monthly)
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Like the idea of Ashkenazi
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
Like the idea of Ashkenazi playing his socks off. The beauty of the girl is so lovingly and affectionately described, and it's great how she brings the whole thing back down to earth with a bump. But it's a dream that can't be broken with a real...
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It's amazing! Enjoyed your
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015
It's amazing! Enjoyed your poem while I should have been sleeping, I think.
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You have given a voice to
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
You have given a voice to great desperation.
Read full commentPosted in Sand, Water and Blood
Subtle is the word - you get
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
Subtle is the word - you get her feelings and her loneliness in the situation even before being hit by your own on the subject. The pulling off of the flower heads is such a strong image and statement - unobserved by anyone who could begin to...
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Excellent !!!
Posted on Thu, 03 Sep 2015
Excellent !!!
Read full commentPosted in Repo Part 2 (Jason's last Repos)
I know that feeling of having
Posted on Wed, 02 Sep 2015
I know that feeling of having to decide not to get mentally involved. We have enough to worry about without taking on the facts of life in nature.
Enjoyed the poem - very visual.
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'Musical box full of sea
Posted on Sat, 29 Aug 2015
'Musical box full of sea-shells, and ‘if onlys’...' I loved that. And the red coat in a black and white photo. Wistful poem with lovely images.
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Disappointed coz I thought it
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
Disappointed coz I thought it was fairies and such, but the poem is lovely. Sharply, simply worded and clever in the way you use what it's not to describe the beauty of scene, and the ultimate point of her leaving.
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The less said, the more you
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
The less said, the more you think.
Read full commentPosted in Saturday Night and Sunday Morning
That does sound rather like a
Posted on Sun, 23 Aug 2015
That does sound rather like a crush. Nothing wrong with that, and this is a very well written and explored piece. I really enjoyed reading it. But I was left at the end thinking how in time you'll realise you don't need the approval of someone...
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