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Ten things seen [in my immediate environment]

By love_writing on Tue, 20 Apr 2021

1. Six bananas on one stalk, two at the back allow two at the front to rest on them, cradling them like grandparents - lean back, you’re safe here ...

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See

By love_writing on Thu, 08 Apr 2021

The cloud moves like a slug sludging its way across the sky, seemingly still yet when you look again - it has moved and carries a parasite on its...

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Stream of Consciousness

By love_writing on Sat, 27 Feb 2021

Clover, dover, sackcloth, stuff of dreams, docks, shipping forecast, does anyone sail - anymore? Been numb so long, heartbreak does that to you and...

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Another. Day.

By love_writing on Fri, 08 May 2020

I remember using the same plastic bottle with a thumb dent in its side. I remember planting seeds on cold slabs as my Greek neighbour took his...

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This is lovely. One of those

Posted on Tue, 30 Jun 2015

This is lovely. One of those poems which you want to read again and again. Heartwarming.

Posted in Love and Adoration

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This is brilliant. Authentic

Posted on Tue, 30 Jun 2015

This is brilliant. Authentic voice and a touching tale. Liked the format too :)

Posted in The Ties that Divide

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Beautifully done. Animals

Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015

Beautifully done. Animals just get on with a moment of fisty-cuffs to sort things out then forget about it...it doesnt seem to matter who bet who...a bit like children too!

Posted in Boxers in Yellow

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Lovely moments of

Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015

Lovely moments of alliteration ; stitching silvered silken strands. Nicely done.

Posted in While you were sleeping

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Nicely and neatly done..

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015

Nicely and neatly done...moments of still mind are to be treasured!

Posted in Silent Chaos

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Beautiful - made me think we

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

Beautiful - made me think we must live for the moment - grab those chances and opportunities whilst we can.

'Threw dreams in the river as glibly as crusts to the birds' creates a touching picture which sums up that feeling of letting go of...

Posted in Future Imperfect

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Beautifully poignant poem. I

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2015

Beautifully poignant poem. I found the lines 'never get used to it' and 'with that tattoo on your wrist' most heartbreaking. Grief leaves a scar that we'll always carry...yet carry on we do.

Posted in I'm Not Here to Talk to You...

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Hi Stephen, this is such an

Posted on Sat, 13 Jun 2015

Hi Stephen, this is such an emotive read I felt transported on the journey from 'the thread of individual voices' to 'I knew everything was beginning again because everything must always begin again' to the pouring of the wine down the sink. It...

Posted in Here is your thread

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I enjoyed this, the rhyming

Posted on Mon, 15 Jun 2015

I enjoyed this, the rhyming works well and thought the ending was sad yet romantic. 'as hand in hand the couple lie' creates a poignant image.

Posted in Boy Blue (Poetry Monthly)

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Brilliant! Love the McConaghy

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2015

Brilliant! Love the McConaghy connection- makes it all the more visual...and the repetitive hopeless place lyrics - the kind that stick in your head all day or night...like our thoughts.