A horrid mask of thunder rides in astride a pony-tail of scudding sky its haunting movements scare their way across hard-earned crops like squeezing...
Mercie Turlough - your kind thoughts are a welcome. Your writing is very good and quite funny too. Observe carefully what is outside your window and something magic will take place.
This poem is evocative, full
Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021
This poem is evocative, full of shivers and reality. I enjoyed your phraseology as I bounced off each stanza which kept coming Closer and Closer...
Read full commentPosted in Wintered Thin
A great read. I feel like a
Posted on Tue, 10 Sep 2019
A great read. I feel like a squirrel chasing one stanza, then another, making sure I capture all the puzzle-pieces.
Read full commentPosted in September Chills
Yes, am feeling bettter,
Posted on Mon, 13 Nov 2023
Yes, am feeling bettter, thanks. Anxiously awaiting X-ray results of head and throat.
Read full commentPosted in Mommy
A substantial poem,
Posted on Wed, 25 Oct 2023
A substantial poem, meaningful and passionate re the sad loss of so many lives.
Read full commentPosted in Identity
Powerful. Rich creativity.
Posted on Mon, 18 Sep 2023
Powerful. Rich creativity.
Read full commentPosted in Scratched
Very lovely, Jenny. You are
Posted on Mon, 21 Aug 2023
Very lovely, Jenny. You are wrapped in summer's glory too.
Read full commentPosted in Swathed In Nature's Beauty
Wow - a safari of words,
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2023
Wow - a safari of words, powerfully written. Thanks for the journey, Paul.
Read full commentPosted in Ranthambore
I like this poem. Memories
Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023
I like this poem. Memories are more than friends - they are part of our skin and bones.
Read full commentPosted in Rediscovering Holes
Mercie Turlough - your kind
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2023
Mercie Turlough - your kind thoughts are a welcome. Your writing is very good and quite funny too. Observe carefully what is outside your window and something magic will take place.
Read full commentPosted in Through Our Country Window
A very good poem blending
Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023
A very good poem blending together a pot-pourri of creativity. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Dragon Gate
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