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A Disturbing Sleep!
I must learn to read things properly. I read the flash fiction comp as 50 words so here is my 50-word offering. A Disturbing Sleep! Laura opened her...
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A Brief Encounter At The Bus Stop! Late IP
A Brief Encounter At The Bus Stop! Late IP 1154 words Laura sat outside in the unexpectedly warm April sunshine drinking her coffee on the patio in...
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The Sat Navigator!- 1556 words
The Sat Navigator! - 1556 words This is a two person sketch but there are two other people with one line. Valerie is the Sat Navigator Pat is Jodine...
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The Embankment! (London)
The Embankment! 632 words Sylvia found a parking space and noted that it was for one hour only with no return. She thought that would be sufficient...
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The Jealous Husband
The Jealous Husband! 1280 Words Taken from the Parkinson's 2016 Show. Two men having a telephone conversation The Phone Rings Brian: (Answering phone...
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Celtic,
Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2016
Celtic,
Where do you get your ideas from? I enjoyed this piece very much and found it quirky and amusing. I particularly liked 'Casper...his hair went on holiday.'
Have a good Christmas,
Moya
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Hello
Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2015
Hello
I did enjoy this. It was a story that sprung from good observation of human nature because I've been one of the circling predators , but get qute indignant if someone circles me.
Moya
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Hello Bee,
Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2015
Hello Bee,
It's so hard to say goodbye. I know how I feel when I've had a house full and then they all go home. I wander about the house hating the silence, but I console myself with thinking about the good time we've all had being...
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Hello Bee,
Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015
Hello Bee,
Just read this and the sense of tranquility and quiet reflection really came across to me. I loved this line
' fine anchored wishes to be moored with just our words'
We need poets like you to show us the world...
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Bee,
Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2015
Bee,
This is such a lovely expression of your feelings for your kitten. I found it very moving so much so that it made me cry. There are so many lines in this that touched me deeply partly because my Lincoln is lying beside me now. I...
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Dearest Bee,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015
Dearest Bee,
I have just read this and I can so empathise with you about the loneliness. I remember how I felt when I was in pain and told by a not unkind nurse that everything would be alright I would soon get used to wearing a wee bag...
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Hello Tina,
Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2015
Hello Tina,
This is another significant poem to add to your collection. Beautiful but tragic. Still you manage to write so well and if the poem concerns your daughter I am always struck by the wistful longing that lies just beneath the...
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Hello Tina,
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015
Hello Tina,
So sad when life gets in the way of love. Beautifully expressed as usual.
Moya.
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Bee,
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2015
Bee,
You are pretty wonderful. I am so glad you will have all your family home to spoil you and give you comfort. I think of you often and I hope the outcome is the one that you would choose for yourself.
Moya xx
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Hello Bee,
Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015
Hello Bee,
Vera is right when she speaks of the sensory and emotional experience. I sometimes think the emotional impact is often forgotten by the nursing staff. I haven't had an MRI scan, but I did have a brain scan and like insert they...
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