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Those old magic photos
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024
Those old magic photos Jenny! I think they call them kodak moments. Something like that. These days people have so many photos they're hard to find Hey? What strikes me how happy we are me & my brother on all of them there are hundreds codac...
Sorry Di I honestly did not mean to criticise your work at all and I don't recall that I ever have. It is a great poem. But please keep in mind any good teacher knows one often learns more from your mistakes and by the way I'm also out of a job....
Yes. Beautiful ending, man's best friend. Heartbreaking sometimes we feel a duty for mourning. And indeed, it is much more noble to live for someone than to die for someone, sometimes living takes great courage.
No doubt inspired by Jules Verne's classic scifi novel 20,000 leagues under the sea. Also makes one think of Jacques C. and the research ship the Calypso.
Good work, original too! We are in, looking out, man and fish roles reversed! Who's...
Those old magic photos
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2024
Those old magic photos Jenny! I think they call them kodak moments. Something like that. These days people have so many photos they're hard to find Hey? What strikes me how happy we are me & my brother on all of them there are hundreds codac...
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enough
Posted on Tue, 27 Aug 2024
You never know what is enough, untill you know what is too much / The road excess leads to the palace of wisdom.
I read these in poems of William Blake, in the proverbs of hell.
Good luck! Tom
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The elephant and ant
Posted on Tue, 25 Jun 2024
The elephant and ant were walking together over the bridge, the ant said "We make this bridge shake hey?!"
We usually say an elephant "trumpets" or such, but you can say "roar" if you like why not?
Keep well, greetings from Africa!...
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Sorry Di I honestly did not mean
Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022
Sorry Di I honestly did not mean to criticise your work at all and I don't recall that I ever have. It is a great poem. But please keep in mind any good teacher knows one often learns more from your mistakes and by the way I'm also out of a job....
Read full commentPosted in February Rainbow
Yes
Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021
Yes. Beautiful ending, man's best friend. Heartbreaking sometimes we feel a duty for mourning. And indeed, it is much more noble to live for someone than to die for someone, sometimes living takes great courage.
Keep well Paul! Tom
Read full commentPosted in With or Without You
No doubt inspired
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2020
No doubt inspired by Jules Verne's classic scifi novel 20,000 leagues under the sea. Also makes one think of Jacques C. and the research ship the Calypso.
Good work, original too! We are in, looking out, man and fish roles reversed! Who's...
Read full commentPosted in Here Be Dragons
it's good to be young
Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2014
It's good to be young and insane.
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positive!
Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2024
Lovely! What a beuatiful optimistic look on Autumn! Excellent desripitions of nature!
All the best! Tom
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I like the idea
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024
I like the idea of a halloween spirit can't be seen, and is not always evil. The rhyme scheme is is excsellent. I wonder how you did it?
Quite sophisticated Luigi! Good.
Cheers! Tom
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Very positive
Posted on Tue, 29 Oct 2024
Very positive, optimistic, inspiring , "Listen, can you hear it? A symphony formed",, "in a symphony that never ends".
I like all your poems - a lot. Great minds think alike! Still have yet to check up the link.
Keep well! Tom...
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